Writing

=WRITING!!! =

My class did this writing activity called Mystery Writer. We all wrote a Four Picture Story which means that you have four pics and you can make up a story as long as you include the picture. Here is my story.







=**Fractured Fairytale**=

This story includes more than one fairytale, but my buddie and I added some characters from movies plus the Pied Piper which is a real fairytale character.

**The three little pigs**

Once upon a time there lived 3 little pigs, one named Mace Windu, another named Yoda and the third pig name was Optimus Prime. Optimus Prime was the odd one out because was a lot taller than his two brothers. His brother Yoda was strong and muscly, but was as thick as a milkshake. Mace Windu which is was the oldest pig had more knowledge than five people put together.

The 3 brothers were really sad because Darth Maul killed there parents Shrek and Fiona. So the 3 brothers talked to each other and decided that they were going to move. They set off on a journey to L.A. They all had a dream that one day they could each own there own Tie Fighter.

When they arrived in L.A, they went strait to Dick Smith to buy there Tie fighters. Optimus Prime bought a Straw Tie fighter, Yoda bought a Stick Tie fighter and Mace Windu bought a Steel Tie Fighter. The 3 brothers all decided to move to the same street just in case Darth Vader attacked.

The next morning Yoda went down to the shops to get the L.A. Herald and some Extra Slim Milk because he thought he was getting a little on the tubby side. When Yoda got home he sat down with a warm cup of Powerade and read the paper. On the front page of the L.A. Herald it said PIED PIPER IS ON THE LOOSE!!!, he escaped from Azkaban with help from Ron Weasley and Voldemort. Pied Piper wanted to kidnap Little Red Riding before the big bad wolf got her.

So Yoda went and got his two brothers to come with him to find the Pied Piper... and terminate him. Yoda and his two brothers started there journey to find Pied Piper, they came to a yellow brick road and they weren’t sure if they should follow it. Then the wicked witch of the left came along and said “ Pied Piper went that way but be careful of the flying monkeys” So Yoda and his brothers thanked the old witch and started walking down the yellow brick road. On their way they entered a dark gloomy forest. After about five minutes in the dark forest they encountered a Dementer, Optimus Prime knew the spell to kill it...... “Exspecto Patronum” said Optimus Prime. Then the Dementer fell to the ground and died. They walked up to the Dementer and right behind it was the big bad wolf, he explained to the three brothers that Pied piper went to Grandma’s house. The 3 brothers ran to Grandma’s house when they got there they saw Little Red. Knocking at the door with a basket of cookies and bottle of V. NO!!!!!! don’t go in there but it was to late, Pied Piper grabbed Little Red and threw her into the cupboard. Then Sam came along and gave us some banana milk.

WE DIDN'T FINISH THE STORY SO THATS WHY THE END MAKES NO SENSE.

Lachie: This story is hilerious in many ways but the best thing about about it was (then sam came along and gave us some banana milk) so funny and it was easy to understand and liked all of the characters. I would rate this rate this story a 9/10 because i really liked it.

Chester: HAHA that is an awesome story it is so funny, but try to get it finished next time but other wise it is really cool. My fav bit is when sam came along and gave them some banana milk because it makes no sense.

Exposition Moderation. I did quite badly in this test.

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